by Stormy on Mon Jul 15, 2013 9:55 am
Better than I was expecting. The camera tracking on the manhacks was pretty good, I didn't notice any glaring mistakes. The only thing that stood out to me was when the wood gets smashed it falls to the floor too slowly, like it's feather light. You should speed up the wood falling, make a little more dusty fog to obscure the bits, and not have the camera stay on it for so long, so the viewer doesn't get a really good look at it. Also the actors face was pretty much emotionless the whole time which wasn't particularly offputting but a little eyebrow raise or mouth pursing here or there can help convey the concept that he has some sort of thought process going on.
And that crowbar was fucking tiny. Did you get it in a kinder surprise?