SP Zombie_Cabin

[Shifty155]

http://www.pranksnfiles.com/shifty/zombie_cabin.rar

[InvestmentBanking]

Uhh... brushwork needs some work, as well as filling up all that empty space, but I can't deny that it wouldn't be fun!

[Jman]

I'm making a cool sp map too.

[Shr3d]

that's just screaming for improvement. nice for a first map though.

[Shifty155]

What could I do to imrpove it?

[InvestmentBanking]

give the buildings more detail, fill up those big open areas, perhaps add a fence, some trees, and scatter approriate props across the map. Also, if you know how add in some displacements, and make those buildings have some sidewalks and streets by them... just a few suggestions.

[Generalvivi]

you work with me............................ this must be a joke map or somthing im sure.

[strait-2-the-point]

needs allot and allot of improvements dude! decals, maybe displacements to make it more interesting, props <3 and all that crap!

[Shifty155]

:?

you work with me............................ this must be a joke map or somthing im sure.

Hey, I'm a voice actor, not a mapper

[Viceman]

I gotta agree with that brushwork, it needs work. And your rooms in that buildinga are huge! Check the scale. Build more smaller rooms. Add frames to doors and windows.

[Bad)-(and]

It's not bad, but it's not brillaint either. It's way to blocky and empty.

[YokaI]

It's not bad, but it's not brillaint either. It's way to blocky and empty.

Hmm, that avatar looks strangly familiar. Please ask before you use peoples work as your avatar, its quite rude.

Anyway, map looks ok. The rooms are a bit too flat and you need to add a bit more brush detail in general. Overall I can say its a good start.

[tr0mb0ne]

Looks like an okay map, but those enormous square windows are just ruining it for me

[Genome]

i'll say this the zombies do look cool. sort of a night of the living dead thing. maby make it bigger and more detailed (im assuming this is a single player map) go back and play ravenholm. observe anything you can from it. valve did a good job with that part of half life 2 (a little to resident evily for me but whatever) try some creative lighting effects and some enviroments that may be difficult to navigate or predict (falling stairwells, electricity, fire, whatever you can imagine.) very good start though. lots of potential.

[kumo]

you seem to like open maps, the first room is almost to big, and the "city" is also a little to open. You should make some roads there. You should also seperate the big room into some smaller rooms. Keep it up!