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Clutch Castle

Postby aTam on Tue Dec 20, 2011 3:51 am

This is something I'm working on alone. I am trying to make it look as good as possible on stock content. I am making this for both CSS and CS GO, with the CS GO version having my own custom content. I'm looking for some criticism to help make it look better. This map contains a new gameplay mod I have made from an entity chain.

I'm looking to join a mod team for Source of Natural-Selection 2. I'm 24 and from Ontario. Add me on Steam

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/9776 ... t30001.jpg
http://steamcommunity.com/id/zastels/
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Re: Clutch Castle

Postby aTam on Tue Dec 20, 2011 1:22 pm

I totally forgot to add the picture.
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Re: Clutch Castle

Postby shadowmancer471 on Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:32 pm

Looks pretty good, liking the ceiling
However I don't feel like the blue sofa and radiator fit in with the time the architecture suggests
I want to get off Mr.Bones Wild Ride
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Re: Clutch Castle

Postby Kudden on Wed Jan 18, 2012 5:24 pm

It looks good. :smt023 I especiallyl like the lightning.
Though, there is to little broken material on the floor from the broken wall. It's like someone has cleaned the rubble up.
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Re: Clutch Castle

Postby nub on Wed Jan 18, 2012 6:36 pm

Looks nice so far, but the broken wall looks unrealistic, and damn, it's thick. It's really hard to make a believable destroyed wall when it's made of that kind of material.

Honestly, the entire house kind of makes no sense to me, but it looks cool and for me, and that's all that matters.
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Re: Clutch Castle

Postby Phott on Wed Jan 18, 2012 6:38 pm

The thick wall really makes everything else look tiny and feel very surreal. I think it's a cool effect, but maybe not what you were aiming for.
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Re: Clutch Castle

Postby nub on Wed Jan 18, 2012 6:59 pm

Phott wrote:The thick wall really makes everything else look tiny and feel very surreal. I think it's a cool effect, but maybe not what you were aiming for.


Now that I look at it, it kind of does look cool. Though the destroyed part still needs some work.
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