l4d_sv_citypark

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l4d_sv_citypark

Postby Miigga on Thu May 28, 2009 2:43 pm

A Left 4 Dead survival map set in a city park.

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Download it here: http://solidfiles.com/d/vxIO

Extract it to SteamApps\common\left 4 dead\left4dead\maps and enter "map l4d_sv_citypark" in the console to play this map.
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Re: l4d_sv_citypark

Postby MayheM on Thu May 28, 2009 3:34 pm

I like everything except for the doorway in the second screenshot. It does not look like a real world doorway... It looks more like something you would see in a black mesa lab with sliding metal doors.

Other then that it loos really nice...
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Re: l4d_sv_citypark

Postby nub on Sun May 31, 2009 8:04 pm

Yeah that doorway is a bit strange-looking.

Another little minor detail that might need fixing is in the 4th screenshot. The little lamp that shines on the table with all the equipment has a point_spotlight angled a little too shallow compared to the lamp's angle. Looks a little strange. To be honest I think just a glow sprite might do the job rather than an actual beam. Unless there's like smoke or steam near that area, there shouldn't be a beam in the first place. It's a nit-pick and doesn't really detract from the map.

But the rest of the map looks like Valve's work (I mean this in a good way). Fantastic job, especially on that crashed bus.
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Re: l4d_sv_citypark

Postby joe_dirt976 on Sun May 31, 2009 8:30 pm

the second sceen looks weird. Imagine yourself spraypainting graffiti up that high.
love the last one though.
Keep working on it, time will pay off.
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Re: l4d_sv_citypark

Postby vcool on Sun May 31, 2009 8:38 pm

Giraffiti is more than possible, joe. I've seen tons.
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Re: l4d_sv_citypark

Postby RA7 on Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:47 am

Nice, but it looks just like a basic L4D map, no custom textures, different theme or setting.
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Re: l4d_sv_citypark

Postby Vilham on Sat Jun 06, 2009 1:13 pm

only major crit ive got is that the architecture seems very square.
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