I bet I can fix it. but first something that might help: press alt + P, it checks for problems. if that doesn't work, try this:
http://developer.valvesoftware.com/wiki/Compile_Errors or even this:
http://www.interlopers.net/errors/Those help me a lot. But sometimes even after that, it can crash for what seems like no reason. post the vmf here and I'll see if I can help.
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Map progress update:
I am accustomed to adding easter eggs to my maps, so I did. Will post screenies soon. also, considering changing the theme a little, as the easter egg only some-what fits the Highway 17 look.