Jordan Russell - Level Designer [11/15/07]

[Mr. Happy]

Lol, you have my exact name and internet nickname. :/

perhaps its a fight club dealie between you too. one only comes out at night....

[SgtJman]

eh, I've been meaning to change my name for a while, sgtjman seems so silly, with sgt, and the j and the man. jordash was taken on gmail and that made me a little angry... but soon enough other jman can have the name all to himself

[Shr3d]

eh, I've been meaning to change my name for a while, sgtjman seems so silly, with sgt, and the j and the man. jordash was taken on gmail and that made me a little angry... but soon enough other jman can have the name all to himself

Any forum admin can change it for you.

[Frips]

Nice portfolio, some great shots. I hope you still have those screenshots as PSDs though, as there are a couple typos (almost one in every shot).
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Sewer Labs:

Suffering the effects of neglect and vandalism, the "Sewer Labs" are the result of an abandoned research experiment conducted by the government some years previous.

The architecture seen here is based off a grimy sewer tunnel with high ceilings...

I would also reconsider the use of "effects" in the last sentence

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Nuclear Control:

...The bunker's (or bunkers', depending on how many you are referencing) purpose is to manage and practice the movement of nuclear waste to various facilities via an underground railway (or consider network of rails).

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Sky Office:

...Office workers are muttering in corners while others feebly trying to find escape from their concrete and metal trap.

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Well I don't have time to correct more, so this shall do. I don't mean to pick it apart, but if this is meant to represent your work, then you want everything to be top-notch, including your writing!

[SgtJman]

actually, thank you, I suck balls at english

you've saved me from hurting my brain thinking

[Frips]

Got a little carried away (more of a rewrite, sorry) with these next ones but I hope they at least help:



The Corporation - Hosptial:

This bleach white hospital is one of the major focal points, enhancing the story and building the action in "The Corporation". The straight forward architectural approach makes an easily accesible area offset by the mayhem and destruction cause by a zombie outbreak.

Dark Source - Labs

The nameless labs of Dark Source are the featured area during the critical information gathering and plotadvancement phase during the start of the game. The labs are rundown and overgrown with damaged ceilings barely held up by the rusted and strained metal trusses. Despite the delapitated conditions, the labs are still a hive of ativity in anticipation of the unravelling storyline.

The labs are an open environment with many side corridors leading to small offices or experiment areas. These areas can reveal nuggets of information or interesting areas for player interaction.

(second image):

NPC Interaction is a major benefit for the player whilst in the labs. The player's interactions with the surrounding scientists may result in a dismissal or can tease the player with pieces of information slowly revealing the background and hinting at what is still to come.

[SgtJman]

I've updated the captions, its my own version of what you've suggested but still mostly from you, thanks a bunch

[Sauce]

Is it just me or is everybody from Australia on this site from Perth?

Well you're from Melbourne, then there's the Nigredo Studios guy in Sydney.

How could you possibly forget me, Shr3d?!? HOW?!?!

I'm in Brizzy but it does seem there are an awful lot of Perth kiddies around here... but isn't Perth in a technological hole?

Your portfolio is teh sex.

[Shr3d]

Is it just me or is everybody from Australia on this site from Perth?

Well you're from Melbourne, then there's the Nigredo Studios guy in Sydney.

How could you possibly forget me, Shr3d?!? HOW?!?!

I'm in Brizzy but it does seem there are an awful lot of Perth kiddies around here... but isn't Perth in a technological hole?

Your portfolio is teh sex.

Sorry !!:P

Anyway, I didn't put down blahman or bomba so shoosh up.

Perth might be in a tech hole but I can order stuff from the eastern states easily so I got no problems. I got a krzr k1 for $400 eastern states, here it's $660. :S

[amckern]

Is it just me or is everybody from Australia on this site from Perth?

Well you're from Melbourne, then there's the Nigredo Studios guy in Sydney.

Did some one say my name?

Adam

[TKAzA]

Well no one mentioned little old me, *me slaps you all*

[punky]

verry nice man

ps:woot this is my first post

[Sauce]

Is it just me or is everybody from Australia on this site from Perth?

Well you're from Melbourne, then there's the Nigredo Studios guy in Sydney.

Not to be off topic, but God dammit Shr3d, you always forget me

[JLea]

Is it just me or is everybody from Australia on this site from Perth?

Well you're from Melbourne, then there's the Nigredo Studios guy in Sydney.

Not to be off topic, but God dammit Shr3d, you always forget me

I think you stated that up above