[Portal] Deleted Chambers

[Flippy-HTF]

OK, I think I have to posted here.

Hello everyone. I'm just doing some maps about Portal, and there are going to be some maps that will make a sequence. Here is the first chamber of "Deleted Chambers". When I create another map, I'll post it here as an oficial Thread of this sequence.

Hope you like it, there're screenshots and vid.

P.S: I don't know why a chair from the first screenshot doesn't appear.

[Jike]

I'll try not to be harsh...

It's crap... Take a look at Portals visual artstyle. Walls are walls, floors are floors, the behind the scenes have a redish teint and the chambers themselves a claustrophobic hygienic feel. The window rooms are bright and blue.

The chair is probably not appearing, because its not the right prop-type!" There are prop_physics, prop_dynamics, prop_statics. Sometimes you cant make a prop every type. Hammer model viewer will tell you which is possible! Read stuff about lighting too, thats very important.

I wish you luck on future stuff!

[ErikKiller]

Needs more textures, better brushwork, fix the obvious bugs.
Why the fizzler in the beginning?

[Flippy-HTF]

good question erik xD don't know why put it xD i suppose for a better look

thanks for your comments, I'll take care in the next map, and will take care of props in model viewer also.