by Epifire on Tue Jul 23, 2013 8:14 am
Second to last screen shot seems a little odd with a couple minor things but the overall composition looks great.
My main gripe with that shot are the pipes and the fallen can of tools. You could say a strong wind knocked them off the pile off wood, or that they fell off the back of someone's truck, but on it's own it makes less sense if you isolate that scene on it's own. The pipes themselves don't feel out of place there, it's just these particular ones. The set you use have vertical junctions along the length (built to secure the pipe to an adjacent wall) but they conflict with your theme since the pipes are suspended across the road with no wall support. Only two points I could bring up but as far as I can see the rest looks fine.