my first cs : source map

[murdoch]

Hi this is my first cs : source map

its a remake of an old map i made a few years ago i played with my mates at uni.

it still needs a few things sorting out on it.

dont be to harsh i know its not very good but hey it could be worse.


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this map is my first attempt at making something in ages.

[slayera]

Kinda plain jane.

[Cyberblast]

Still not bad for a first map, I can remember my first..

[Kremator]

Is it just me or did the barrels and stuff didn't cast shadows on the ground?

[Cyberblast]

Is it just me or did the barrels and stuff didn't cast shadows on the ground?

Ha now you say it, prolly magical barrels, EVERYONE knows that magical barrels have no shadow ^^

[wiggle987]

meh its ok but there are some obvious first timer mistakes, like leaving your light_enviroment white

i remember my first map *shudder* ugh it was a horrible hl2dm sawblades map

[holy_cheese]

teh lolol, that was teh funny map. neways don't worry first maps aren't and never will be perfect, good to see your getting stuck in and trying, gj.

[Blink]

Good effort, I didn't know about RAD for the first 3 months of editing, I thought I was cool because I didn't need light entities. Oh the fun of learning on your own.

[Athlete{UK}]

For a first map it really isn't bad mate good effort. Like the other have stated obvious new comer mistakes. Completely white ligh_env which im not sure is pitched at -90. You have no displacements which looks odd because you have flat snad everywhere and everything is encased by a 20ft wall rather then using a 3d sky box to make it look like your bart of a complex down or beyond the (smaller) walls there is nothing but sunes and desert. Also it looks a little drab.

Now please don't take what i have said as me having a go at you. Im just supplying feeb back and like i said this isn't bad but do your self a favor. Take on bord what people are saying practice with this map and don't release it. use this to practice and sharpen your skills. Good luck

[Cr4ig]

like athlete said - displacement terrain would make it look alot better, although still nice for a 1st map.