W.I.P screens dm_castlerock

[twinmatrix101]

This is my first real map for hl2dm what do you think?











believe it or not its a castle

[Cyberblast]

Hmm well done for a first map, try making it a bit rounder and fuller. It's squarish and at some places it looks rather empty. But as I said it's a fine map for a first one. Put in some displacements, they'd make it alot better

[holy_cheese]

there's only so many replies for a first map, and im pretty sure that move have been said on this forum. neways, good on ya for getting into mapping and hope to see some good maps from you in the future.

[slayera]

I think you should replace some of those textures, the area witht the horse does not look right. Try framing around the windows or something.

[twinmatrix101]

Which textures should I redo? I wanted the windows to look big and to be framless to give the room a more modern look, I also put the ceiling at a slant.

heres some more angles of the room









Please give me some more suggestions, I really enjoy mapping and any tips would be greatly appreciated.

[slayera]

All of them or make your own. At least the brick ones. This is your only hint. If someone tells you something then just do it or not. Trust the opinions of others though, whether or not you agree, there is something there that someone sees as lacking. Just go back over and change it, dress it up, build it stonger and faster than ever before. (oh, a six million dollar man mod???? just thought of that) Sorry, I did not want to come off as ranting and this is at tip for any mapper, not just a dig at this guy.

Did I slap with the fish again???

FREE HINT 2: google a few images up of something close to what your working on and see how its made and painted.