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[lordnimbus]

Please check out my BETA map, first time I've ever worked in 3D for what its worth!

http://img168.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img168& ... 0005oa.jpg
http://img168.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img168& ... 0016mh.jpg
http://img168.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img168& ... 0020kd.jpg
http://img168.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img168& ... 0031qu.jpg
http://img168.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img168& ... 0048bc.jpg
http://img168.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img168& ... 0057mt.jpg
http://img168.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img168& ... 0064vm.jpg
http://img168.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img168& ... 0077ua.jpg

[Murkrow]

wow looks preety cool 4 first map

add some more trees and props and map will be even better

oh btw, some things looks like floating. that looks good not very

and that roundy platform.... well i dont get it

[slayera]

I like the displacement work, but the rest... yuk. Nothing looks like it belongs to together, looks like randon stuff stuck all over. It kinda looks like a you spent a couple of hours tossing in models on a displacement. I would rip out the models and do some more BSP work while thinking about your layout. Even out your area more, seems like everything is stuck in one area of the map, and that looks empty too.

[Red Dawn]

Yeah, work on your routes and chokepoints first, then add your misc. stuff in later. Could be a cool map though. Kinda reminds of some of the Halo maps...