Dm_FMU

[dasgman]

Iam like 50% done with this map its my first

[YokaI]

Take an inscrene picture, every thing is way to squar, try curving some stuff

[Cr4ig]

Is very hard to judge from hammer shots.

[seppe]

hammer makes the most buitifull maps look ugly

[Athlete{UK}]

You deffinatly need some variations in texture. Nothing but bit yellow and stripy

[Cr4ig]

Just noticed - you don't often get outdoor vending machines. Might want to move that.

[Athlete{UK}]

Just noticed - you don't often get outdoor vending machines. Might want to move that.

You be surprised the hospital my grandad was in had outdoor venting machines. A lot of train stations do and i have seen the odd shop with them outside.

[dasgman]

You should go t Kmart sometimes (they usually have vending machines outside)

[Jest@]

everything seems a little oversized to me. Huuuge towering walls either side. I've noticed it's a common flaw in early mapping, a misjudged sense of scale and proportion. Outdoor vending machines are perfectly believable in proper context, yours do look a touch out-of-place.

[dasgman]

sry but its my first map I cant make good ones yet

[YokaI]

thats alright, doesnt look much better than my first map ^^ all you really need to do is compile it and see how it looks

[RPM]

what you definatly got to do is have more variety in the textures, what i see there is 5 wall textures and 2 different floor textures... try to make this big yellow stuff look like different buidings, and add interest to the yellow walls by adding powerlines pipes, windows, stairs, etc..
my map also kinda looked like this but ive changed allot before i posted it here....

[Athlete{UK}]

I'll tell you what i tell everyone who make first map posts. Don't release it you'l regret it. Use this to practice on.

[dasgman]

"shift"+"del"=DELETED!

[Cr4ig]

Good call. Use them for practice.