Filbornaskolan aka Filbornaschool

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Filbornaskolan aka Filbornaschool

Postby ofstudios on Wed Jun 13, 2007 12:11 am

Hi everybody!

About the map
The map is a school project that I had on Highschool, I have made a part of my school, a swedish school I got graded of it.

All the rooms are existing in the real world! I made it in a scale, so the size is not 100% maby 85-90% hard to tell.

I'm not sure if there's someone out there remember a old topic, when I was starting this map...

About the making

Well now every part is taking place, and the map is well let's say 78% Done. There is several custom made models, I didn't make any model ! All models are made by Jed http://www.wunderboy.org/index.php (except the lamp that * made, but the skinning of the lamp is also made by Jed)
And also, I will put up the models and textures for downloading later!

But I made most of the textures of the map, ofcourse I got alot of help from Interlopers forum and Tutorials, after all this is my first map !

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And later there will be a beta testing before release.
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Postby SlappyBag on Wed Jun 13, 2007 12:19 am

Watch out, the last people who did this got utterly battered.
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Postby YokaI on Wed Jun 13, 2007 12:48 am

Ya, depends on where you live though. :-D

Other than that, I like the custom material but the textures can use more detail and the light could use less - colored lights. Make them white with a tint of blue rather than being all blue.
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Postby ofstudios on Wed Jun 13, 2007 9:19 am

^Slick wrote:Watch out, the last people who did this got utterly battered.


Well, let's say for now, it's just a Hl2 Single map -whitout any weapons. But I'm going to make it as an css map.

YokaI wrote:Ya, depends on where you live though.

Other than that, I like the custom material but the textures can use more detail and the light could use less - colored lights. Make them white with a tint of blue rather than being all blue.


Okey, thanks for the tips, I will work more with the light, and put some white light there too.
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Postby Mr. Happy on Wed Jun 13, 2007 6:52 pm

It doesn't look to bad but it has an odd feeling to it, hard to put my finger on, but it looks like every surface, every wall, absolutely everything is made from plastic? Either A. your school looks really strange or B. put more time into your textures!

The lighting in the first column third row is quite cool, does it really look like that all blue and whatnot?
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Postby Fearian on Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:32 pm

^Slick wrote:Watch out, the last people who did this got utterly battered.


ROFL.

yeah looks good, just dont keep any actual hammers or anything under your desk. it wont help your case when the police take you away!
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Postby The Watcher on Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:38 pm

I'm starting to wonder if this "hammer" they mentioned is actually Valve Hammer Editor? :roll:
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Postby Kvackabill on Wed Jun 27, 2007 1:21 pm

Looks good, however the lighting makes it look boring.
I think it would look better if sunlight shined trough those windows.
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Postby EagleStrike on Wed Jun 27, 2007 3:27 pm

Looks good! I wonder if wunderboy would be willing to make me models like that!
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Postby Sathor on Wed Jun 27, 2007 3:58 pm

Police will pay you a visit if you do something like this here, everybody grew over-sensitive after some guys went crazy ... :cry:

The map itself looks good, just work on it some more. :wink:
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Postby Sniggers on Wed Jun 27, 2007 4:23 pm

Looks sexy. The textures and lighting need work (hint: add HDR :)) but it's a nice WIP.
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Postby ovary on Fri Jun 29, 2007 9:50 pm

I love the use of models but the rooms look kind of boxy try adding some wavy desks with glass on top more contemporary design stuff.. Look in some upscale design magazines for inspiration my favorite one is "Wallpaper"... you won't find it at your local Walmart kind of store but if you look around in the more upscale bookstores you will find it.. I think chapters or indigo also carries it.. I love the pulp fiction poster and the overall studio feel. possibly spread out the desks so theres more routes of getting around.. Some shots are looking a tad closed off maybe I'm just too claustrophobic. The lighting also is kind of cheesy right now too many colors stick to one color that compliments the surroundings. Maybe bright whites contrasted with dark metallic textures .. Keep goin at it looks awesome otherwise...!!
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Re: Filbornaskolan aka Filbornaschool

Postby ofstudios on Wed Mar 31, 2010 10:29 pm

Hi everybody!

Long time no see :D. I haven't been here for a long time, and realise that I never realesed the models for public, well anyhow here they are. All credits go to Jed for a fantastic work, they still look great. :smt023

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=QBAWMMZE

And if you wish a tour inside the map I'v uploaded the presentation I used for the project.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fQ4PJQ2jZVk

Ja mata ne :smt039
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