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dm_atrium

Postby Avtraz on Mon Mar 28, 2005 10:36 pm

I have been working on this map during my march break and it is far from finished, I'd like some comments and constructive critisism.

Error List:
-Cables in lab to not connect propperly
-basement floor is not furnished yet
-underneith the stairs is being a dick
-teleporter needs a beam of some sort
-surrounding yard and wall needs more detail
-refinery in skybox is too high up

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Postby Dead-Inside on Tue Mar 29, 2005 12:01 pm

Round the straicasehole more.
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Postby zombie@computer on Tue Mar 29, 2005 12:08 pm

the room on the roof is too blocky, its just a model-filled box atm. try adding a rim/roof, windows, beams inside to support the roof etc.
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Postby Avtraz on Fri Apr 01, 2005 9:15 pm

Any more suggestions?
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Postby Cr4ig on Fri Apr 01, 2005 9:34 pm

Could just be your comp, but might wanna optimize it from that FPS of yours.
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Postby Avtraz on Fri Apr 01, 2005 9:45 pm

It's my comp, don't worry about it.
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