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--{ De_Streets }-- BETA 1 DL

Postby lebouzil on Thu Apr 28, 2005 10:37 am

Hi !
There's some screens of my first map for CSS .
Do you like it ? What could be change ? >>
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Postby slayera on Thu Apr 28, 2005 11:12 am

Not too bad looking. Good mix of brush work, props, and decals. Some places could be textured a little better. Looks like a fun map to play. Do you have an overview?
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Postby Jest@ on Thu Apr 28, 2005 12:05 pm

Good stuff.

Good to see a new mapper using rounded corners, varied height levels in the streets etc etc. There is something wrong-looking about all of it though....perhaps you need to focus your attention thematically a bit more? It looks kinda cluttered, like you're trying to include every little trick, every cool-looking thing you can easily do.

yeah, let's see an overview
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Postby lebouzil on Thu Apr 28, 2005 12:12 pm

Yep thanks for your comments ! overview (without RAD) >>

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Postby Jest@ on Thu Apr 28, 2005 1:37 pm

Not bad looking, not bad at all....
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Postby slayera on Thu Apr 28, 2005 7:36 pm

From the overview it looks like the map is CT biased, looks like all they need to do is hold site A. T's will never have a chance of planting at B till all the CT's are dead, unless there is something I am not seeing from the top here. Good choke points though.
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Postby Deadman on Thu Apr 28, 2005 7:42 pm

slayera wrote:From the overview it looks like the map is CT biased, looks like all they need to do is hold site A. T's will never have a chance of planting at B till all the CT's are dead, unless there is something I am not seeing from the top here. Good choke points though.


well if I'm reading this correctly there is a tunnel from the west side of A to the north side of B (using the top as North that is)

Unless I'm reading the map the wrong way
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Postby YokaI on Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:04 am

very dark maps turns off some players, good luck
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Postby Spartan on Fri Apr 29, 2005 12:30 am

I really like the 2nd picture. Although there is one problem with the 2nd pic. From the view the shot is taken the left side looks a little bare. You've got apartment building surrounding the open area but then you have a bare area off to the corner.
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Postby lebouzil on Fri Apr 29, 2005 9:56 am

Deadman wrote:well if I'm reading this correctly there is a tunnel from the west side of A to the north side of B (using the top as North that is)


Indeed. :wink:
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Postby ReK0 on Fri Apr 29, 2005 5:18 pm

This map looks alright. But you really need to ask yourself. Would i really walk down the street and see buildings like these. Does it look real.
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Postby lebouzil on Sat Apr 30, 2005 9:21 am

I think its real yes, but you ? ^^
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Postby lebouzil on Sat May 14, 2005 6:26 pm

BETA 1 TEST !!
Download !!

http://home.tele2.fr/damienseilhean/de_streets_b1.zip

I'm expecting comments and critics !
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Postby R04DRunerr on Mon May 16, 2005 6:52 pm

The first pic is far too dark. The sun looks good but the rest I can't even see. Is that my monitor or is it really that dark?
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Postby Spartan on Mon May 16, 2005 6:54 pm

You need to fix some texture alignments in several places.
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