Indoor Atrium - Very much WIP

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Indoor Atrium - Very much WIP

Postby dirtydeeds on Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:23 pm

I started working on this a couple a days ago. My vision is to have a small warehouse on one side, a couple of hallways, an atrium, all connected back around to another open area. I figured I would start with the atrium first, and build everything around it. Tell me what you guys think, and Im open to suggestions...

How I started it....

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First Ingame shot....

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With a couple of planters... (not sure if I want run them down both sides or not)

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I'm planning on connecting each end of the atrium to a hallway that leads into another area of the map
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Re: Indoor Atrium - Very much WIP

Postby Jangalomph on Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:50 pm

Perhaps a little wider and taller? Seems kind of confined to me.
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Re: Indoor Atrium - Very much WIP

Postby dirtydeeds on Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:56 pm

I was thinking the same thing.... Right now its 168 high by 256 wide by 512 long
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Re: Indoor Atrium - Very much WIP

Postby Phott on Fri Jun 25, 2010 1:29 am

I think the size is good if you're going to use it to connect 2 larger greenhouses.
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Re: Indoor Atrium - Very much WIP

Postby Cysticcraze on Fri Jun 25, 2010 4:35 pm

Seems really blocky to me, and your texture choices dont apeal to me... But these are both appinions, not constructive critisism, sorry =S. Ill keep an eye on it, to early to give you some serious critique.
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Re: Indoor Atrium - Very much WIP

Postby Mr. Happy on Sat Jun 26, 2010 12:49 pm

looking much better from your "map pimpage thread" shots
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