Ven_dawn(WIP)

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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Eyefunk on Fri Oct 15, 2010 5:54 am

Do you think the foliage is too green? I think it needs to be more yellowish.
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Groxkiller585 on Fri Oct 15, 2010 10:52 am

Yeah, I think it just needs to have a darker shade of green (but not more saturated, just darker) with a slight more tint of yellow. If the texture's just for this map (or it's your preference) then go ahead and make them more yellow but I would think of the big picture and try to make it so it works in other maps.

Granted it could work as it is now but only in maps with a sunrise/sunset. Of course this is how I make textures, you obviously don't have to do it this way, make it how you'd like.
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Eyefunk on Sat Oct 16, 2010 3:12 am

Alright, thanks for the tips.
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Smurftyours on Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:45 am

Holy fuck that first shot out of the new ones is amazing. Well done.
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Eyefunk on Sun Oct 17, 2010 7:41 pm

Thanks! I'm trying very hard to learn new ways to do stuff on the Source engine, so things might be slow. Remember, I really haven't been mapping that long. D:
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Groxkiller585 on Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:40 pm

If this is you as a beginner, your Pro maps will destroy the game with sheer incredibleness. When I was at your level I could barely get a good-looking map together; let alone make it look better with lighting.

That wasn't long ago,and now I think I can do pretty well.
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby RA7 on Sun Oct 17, 2010 11:03 pm

Pretty sweet ....
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Eyefunk on Wed Oct 20, 2010 2:19 am

Thanks guys, I recently made a cave area, here is an air shaft to outside.
And yes, it is snowing.
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby city14 on Wed Oct 20, 2010 2:23 am

Are you working on Dear Esther..?
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Eyefunk on Wed Oct 20, 2010 9:55 pm

Nope, but I have played dear esther. I really don't think it looks like it either...
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Eyefunk on Wed Oct 20, 2010 10:16 pm

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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Plague on Wed Oct 20, 2010 10:23 pm

Eyefunk wrote:Nope, but I have played dear esther. I really don't think it looks like it either...


Don't troll man...

Looking amazing!
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Eyefunk on Thu Oct 21, 2010 4:14 am

Oh lol. I just watched the video for the new caves for dear esther. NOW I see the similarities.
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Eyefunk on Sat Oct 23, 2010 3:28 am

Quick update:
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Re: Ven_dawn(WIP)

Postby Duke Nukem on Mon Oct 25, 2010 7:54 pm

this is such a cool lighting, you really got a hand for it there...
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