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Postby Grim Reaper on Wed Jun 01, 2005 2:19 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Wow thats the funniest thing ive seen today.


*DING* People go back on topic.
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Postby Grim Reaper on Wed Jun 01, 2005 2:37 pm

*UPDATE*

Ive just updated a teeny weeny part of my map, deleted and added a few things.

http://tinypic.com/5l884g
http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=6/15109361417.jpg&s=x4
http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=6/15109372418.jpg&s=x4


By the way, should i keep the fog do yout think?
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Postby Yoshi on Wed Jun 01, 2005 3:26 pm

pff what an assholes here going on offtopic. i hate them. at least i stay ontopic, anyway http://tinypic.com/5l884g that isnt looking that bad. except the door. change the size.
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Postby Grim Reaper on Wed Jun 01, 2005 3:52 pm

Thanks heres another shot of that area with my update, and two other shots of climbable ivy!! :D

Shot of the climable ivy:
http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=6/15110481964.jpg&s=x4

Shot of me when ive climbed it:
http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=6/15110502059.jpg&s=x4

Shot of the updated area outside the factory area:
http://tinypic.com/5l9ag8

iw00t! for climable ivy, Grim out.
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Postby matteh on Wed Jun 01, 2005 3:59 pm

Whats going on with the texturing on the back wall in that last shot? looks ugly as hell.
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Postby Grim Reaper on Wed Jun 01, 2005 4:03 pm

I know but ive finished it now, lol i didnt see it.
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Postby seppe on Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:03 pm

yoshi the only thing i want you to know, that is that you're telling people they suck in mapping, that is not nice to hear as an starting mapper.
Because of people like you beginning mappers stop mapping.
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Postby Blink on Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:09 pm

Encourage new mappers, not tell them that they suck, most already know they aren't great. But everyone is proud of their first maps. Go map on a new engine and editor and you'll experience the same thing when you get a new area running for the first time.

But, let's stay on the topic of Grim's map...
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Postby Spartan on Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:22 pm

Yoshi just shut up. Dr. Glass wasn't being an ass. He was trying to tell the guy what the problems were and how to fix them. Infact his first sentence he wrote was telling someone else to stop being an asshole.
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Postby Yoshi on Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:28 pm

no it's about understanding what i say.

"this is your best map ever. but it still sucks"

it means: this is your best map ever. he is progressing, starting to learn things. from what i've seen him creating this is the best what he made.
BUT, it still sucks. yes it sounds hard, but it is the truth. my well known friend DrGlass gave the arguments for it because i was to lazy to tell it.

good maybe it's a bit hard, but i was just being honest, just like DrGlass.

and now: ONTOPIC!!! :smt014
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Postby Spartan on Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:34 pm

Don't try and justify murder. If your going to be an ass then atleast admit to it. Like I use to do... and still do on occasion.
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Postby Grim Reaper on Wed Jun 01, 2005 5:48 pm

Bah, yoshi you didnt explain what sucked, and you could of just said:

Your map is ok but it needs a little work.

Anyway, yeh on topic please, what do you guys think of it?
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Postby matteh on Wed Jun 01, 2005 6:21 pm

You cant release it in its current state. I can see theres a lot that needs fixing just from the screenshots.
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Postby showNOmercy on Wed Jun 01, 2005 6:32 pm

Grim Reaper wrote:Bah, yoshi you didnt explain what sucked, and you could of just said:

Your map is ok but it needs a little work.

Anyway, yeh on topic please, what do you guys think of it?


Seriously, most have already expressed what they think of it. I agree with most on that it is a bunch of boxes with props.

This pic makes no sense. The APC looking vehicle looks like it was air-lifted in, the light on the wall is like 8ft off the ground and is a street lamp.

Focus on scale and placement of objects and textures.

http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=6/15109361417.jpg&s=x4
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Postby Spas12 on Wed Jun 01, 2005 8:09 pm

Not bad. medioker shall i say? some more props and architecture work would do nicely. could brighten up the lighting a bit too. bk11 bk11 bk11 bk11 bk11 bk11 bk111/10
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