Downtown (Insurgency/GameBanana)

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Downtown (Insurgency/GameBanana)

Postby nnnn on Thu Sep 25, 2014 8:01 pm

So I've been working on a level for the Insurgency / GameBanana competition. It's set in a downtown area in Iraq, but not anywhere in particular.

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Re: Downtown (Insurgency/GameBanana)

Postby Spas12 on Fri Sep 26, 2014 2:03 am

Nice work overall but you need more detail and garbage on the street. it looks too clean for a war battle. make some blown up buildings and stuff. that tall building looks too thin. other than that nice job.
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Re: Downtown (Insurgency/GameBanana)

Postby SotaPoika on Fri Sep 26, 2014 4:07 am

Layout reminds of CoD4's "District". Doesn't matter though, looks great! :)
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Re: Downtown (Insurgency/GameBanana)

Postby Major Banter on Fri Sep 26, 2014 11:24 am

It's damn near a carbon copy.
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Re: Downtown (Insurgency/GameBanana)

Postby nnnn on Fri Sep 26, 2014 7:50 pm

Hmm I suppose. The lower sections started life as a canal through the city but it just didn't look right.

I'm doing more work on the ground level details now.
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