dm_dockyard

[Stratocaster]

I just started this map but so far i'm happy with it. it's not very much yet but i wanted to have some feedback on it:

[wiggle987]

, thats all i can say, it looks beautiful man!

[Stratocaster]

thx

[Blink]

Yep all good so far, show us some interiors when you can, I'd like to check that out.

[Spartan]

OMFG!!!! It looks exactly like my chocolate factory. NO fucking joke this is the same thing.

[Signy]

Im curious did you script the grass sprites on the right hand side of the first picture? Or are thos just prop_details.

Looking good so far

Sigs

[snufflez]

svweeet i like it only thing about it is though all you have on the walls is those windows up high, wouldnt there be something down low? it looks kinda bare.

[Cr4ig]

looks gd - mayb there is like a risen path way snufflez, but good point.

[snufflez]

or maybe its a glass factory, cuz they always have windows that are high up like that for some reason

[Logo]

The high windows look fine to me and it's what I think of a factory/industrial place, very nicely done.

The only thing about the high windows though is the lower areas look barren. When you get time put some graffiti/objects/decoration around the building's lower parts to spice it up a bit.

Also I find the fence funny because with the higher cliff around the complex the fence isn't keeping anyone in/out .

[Cr4ig]

I was about to say put graffitti at the bottom - dont go over board tho coz u will spoil it.

[BaRRaKID]

just one thing.. how would the graffitti writers be able to get into the factory? it's not a real situation.. no1 would enter a factory surrounded by a fence and cliffs just to do some painting.. big part of the factorys don't even have graffittis.. if you wan't to dirty the map up had stuff like rust, and water marks(humidity?~)

[Spartan]

He stole my chocolate factory!

[Cr4ig]

no he didn't now shh

[Spartan]

The entire building looks exactly like my chocolate factory. This is no joke either.

Can you find no other way to express your self, except for swearing? Please try and keep it clean, Sigs