[Release]DM_sawblade

[wiggle987]

first off, this is not a big map, nor is it complex, i just wanted to dedicate a map to my two favourite things in half life 2, the combine barricades, and the sawblade

anyways, here we go, you can find it with a discription about it and a screenie at this link

[Blink]

Have to login apparently :/

Post it here m8

[wiggle987]

oh yeah sorry forgot about that, lemme see what i can do, while im at it ill post a link to the screenie

http://img98.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img98&im ... de0005.jpg

[Signy]

Looks a bit emtpy, square and the lighting needs tweaking.

Texture work is good, but i think you should make the saw blade placment more random. Giving it a more natual feel.

Dust motes look good. The combine walls look a bit outa place.

Add more detail and smooth the brush work out a bit so the corners are not so obvious and harsh.

Keep up the good work.

Sigs

[wiggle987]

right, taken that into account, ive made it version 0.9 B, so that leaves room for improvement, you can get it here http://www.pcgamemods.com/8930/ and for now, im off to carry on with my art coursework then ill get back to this map (oh btw, the blades stick into the walls )
btw does anyone know how to make the prop_static light in the center unlit? because the shadow on it does make it a bit fugly

[BaRRaKID]

Texture work is good

the texture work is the worst part, at least by the screenie, he is using the same texture for the floor and walls.. a good texture work it's a bit more then that imo

[wiggle987]

aww i liked the texture work i did on it

come to think of it i might add a few overlays and decals to break up the repetition in the wall texture

[BaRRaKID]

lo0l try to had more variation, that's all

[wiggle987]

right, so far so good, ive rounded off the corners, added health stations in the "observer" rooms, im about to hang up the sawblades on little pegs and ive added a little ironic sign... now, does anyone think i should add some blood?

[BaRRaKID]

YES

[wiggle987]

right ive stuck a chopped in half zombie with lotsa gore in the center im now thinking of adding a small outside area